Your Memory on this Road of Solitude

Cast your mournful spell across the evening's cold
On this road I glide, past shuttered homes
The glare of street lights play across the shadows

Right from the start i knew that this one is going to be mindblowing & i am glad to be correct.

Simply outstanding...awesome...loved everything about it. Choice of words and the picture that you painted...loved it.

all the best and take care

Damn, this is a haunting piece. Although it may create or merely seem to create a dark gloomy atmosphere.

It is more about restoring the diminishing love or the fading love, due to the space/distance created by time and fate. Where, the two lovers are separated due to certain circumstances and are eager to reunite.

The poet awaits with a hope that, their paths soon will cross and that, they might collide on the streets and rejoice as lovers and comfort each other until their final sleep.

Or, the poem could actually indicate the demise of the lover, for he/she has turned distant and the author feels their presence in the form of a cold breeze.

Hmmm. . I cant pin point with precision. Nonetheless, I love the poem. The context is mesmerizing.

Each line is beautifully sad as well as very vivid.
You have painted a beautiful scene in my mind with a touch of sadness..lovely read :)

//Cast your mournful spell across the evening's cold
On this road I glide, past shuttered homes
The glare of street lights play across the shadows
//

I loved these lines - the way you have described each thing in such poetic way.

beautifully worded. I enjoyed reading it :)

Oh Randy I loved this but it was heart breaking. Excellent poem with amazing emotions

Connie