Departure Time Of My Memories

Really amazing poem, i like it the way you write..the emotion is powerful and i feel the sadness in each stanza and love the way you write your ending part...

>I am standing with spreading my arms fully
Closing my eyes while looking at the shining sky
Feeling a silent smiles inside my souls and body
Because this is the Departing Time Of My Memories.
Truly amazing",
5/5

Wow this was great. I really enjoyed the imagery here. Expressed your emotions very well. We will start from the beginning:

As Life going with unstoppable time
My heart has learned to beat softly
With the chords of new belongings
Feeling some relief inside the soul

This reminded me of a beautiful melody. Soothing to the soul. Very nice.

A stream of tears restoring again inside
Building strong shore with desire and wishes
Lastly I feel soundless sea after a dark storm
Giving the rest to tears-way behind my eyes

The way you likened the sea giving to rest as your feelings was very good. I could feel that sense of calmness.

I am standing with spreading my arms fully
Closing my eyes while looking at the shining sky
Feeling a silent smiles inside my souls and body
Because this is the Departing Time Of My Memories.

And I could really see this as the person sits in the night sky taking everything in. Such a wonderful feelinng. Excellent job. :)

So nice....i like it!

I love this poem though it kinda feels like a mystery to me,,a great job it's wonderful and beautiful some mesmerizing spots and words fantastic :) 5/5

Amazing job Hassan.
This is by far one of the best you ever wrote.
The emotions are just so deep and sincere.

Keep up the good work :)