Impressive and descriptive writing skills like always, hun. Love the nature themes that you keep doing. |
Wow I really loved this short but amazing :) and sooo BeAuTiFuL,,it's written and worded greatly a fantastic job from a fantastic poem I bet u should take anything and turn it into something :) 5/5 brilliant work |
by Sylvia
A lovely image white water blossoms riding atop waves. I will never again look at those whitecaps the same way after reading this. Nice job. |
A very calming picture framed in my mind, beautiful, elegant and flows together so well. Wonderful imagery and that white blossom just fills me with joy! Thanks for the smile :) |
by NightFlyer
Its amazing how much imagery lies in the brief words of a haiku. A vivid moving image of water blossoms riding the waves, illuminated by the moon, fllls my mind when I read this. Nice haiku. This makes me want to try writing them! |
by Decayed
I so feel tempted by nature poems, especially if they were this small and this vivid. I love it. |
Wow you're amazing. This just made me smile. I've never thought of white caps as blossoms. what a mind you have :-) excellent |
by Whatever works
Awesome haiku |
by Exostosis
Haiku is your favorite type of poetry, and you express yourself beautifully through it. |
by Lioness
I really love the imagery you have set so well in this piece. |
by L
I could've of have swear that I left a comment on this one. Ah.. I guess I didn't press the submit on my ipod. . . |
by Maple Tree
Oh be still my nature heart! What a beautiful haiku!! So elegant~ very nice! |