Living today as if it is our last day would change the way we do things and if it works one day why not another day and then another day. Soon it becomes a habit. Good job.

It's funny that today I would read this. A lot has gone on lately and I think I needed to read something up lifting since poems can get quite depressing on here sometimes.
Great flow wonderful wording. Loved it

Connie

I loved the honesty in your poem .. the way you have expressed yourself... and yeah why can't all days be good. I guess it all depends on us :)

If we keep living like this thinking about others and doing good like we are never going to be able to do this then life will change for the better..hope all is well with you..take care.

Great message in this poem! You mention the last day of your life. If we each lived like it was our last day, we would take care of what was most essential. And the theme I see here is freedom, giving up our grudges, forgiving, setting your self free from the things that bound your life, facing the truth, etc. A wonderful feeling of freedom and release expressed here.

I really enjoyed this. I found it to be unique and interesting.

From start to finish, especially the big finish - i loved loved loved!

very well written indeed. Lots of emotions seeping through each line i read. You always amaze me Ben.

I love the honesty in this! Well in every poem! It's I piqué and beautiful!(: love it hun(: