I'm Wearing A Ring

by Meme   Dec 15, 2011


I drew a plan and I settled
down, I think I have everything
I need. Every goal I set I have
already reached, I thought life
had nothing new installed for me.

Then a fresh breeze of air blew,
carrying your fragrance, it easily
captured my senses. Hypnotized,
I inhaled my first breath of sins that
lead me to a world of never ending
temptations.

Did you do it on purpose?
I cant find an answer. Yet I
convince my mind that it was
a lucky coincidence, so I allow
myself to think of you for one
last time before I admit to the
reality that I am wearing a ring.

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© Copyright 2011 by: gIrL
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  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This romantic poem flowed so well for me

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A delicate and touching poem, nothing heavy yet powerful. Each line brought the reader a little closer to your inner feelings, making them open and beautiful
    Excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Girl, I swear you need to write a book with all your poems :). Each one gets better & better.

    I love how his fragrance brings you into this world of spinning, wanting to just look at him. When finally remembering theres a ring on your finger.

    Love it
    5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    I thought I'd repay the favor of you commenting on one of my poems.

    I wasn't sure what to expect when I read the title, but that was truly amazing. It really was a thought provoking poem.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I will be short Meme! I do not like this at all..because it left me speechless.!
    I mean wow, where are you travelling these days lol ? this is perfection.

    LOVED the idea, loved the emotions, LOVED the feelings LOVED the honesty, LOVED the shocking shocking elements.

    a front page, must be must be a winner, at least its going to my favorites.

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