You're on a roll as of late
bringing out the best of what you have
i'm really curious as to what instigated you to write such a masterpiece, 5/5 a nomination and a winner in my book
front page material right there.

Really Really interesting piece, and so melodious.
But fragrant, should be fragrance ?

Wow, love this!! I liked the first stanza, it reminded me of myself! That is so me lol, I love 'plans' and writing lists! But my favorite was the second stanza, you blew me away with your words!!

"Then a fresh breeze of air blew,
carrying your fragrance, it easily
captured my senses." -- amazing! I love the idea of the air carrying someone's fragrance - it's so nice but it also kind of happens! Sometimes you think smell someone's scent, so this reminded me of a moment like that.

"Hypnotized,
I inhaled my first breath of sins that
lead me to a world of never ending
temptations." - this was very well-written, I like this idea of inhaling a breath of sins.. It also refers to the sense of smell! So nice relevance :)

All in all, great poem! Really enjoyed it! I am also curious to know what inspired you to write this :) do share with me!

5/5

I will be short Meme! I do not like this at all..because it left me speechless.!
I mean wow, where are you travelling these days lol ? this is perfection.

LOVED the idea, loved the emotions, LOVED the feelings LOVED the honesty, LOVED the shocking shocking elements.

a front page, must be must be a winner, at least its going to my favorites.

I thought I'd repay the favor of you commenting on one of my poems.

I wasn't sure what to expect when I read the title, but that was truly amazing. It really was a thought provoking poem.

5/5

-Heather

Girl, I swear you need to write a book with all your poems :). Each one gets better & better.

I love how his fragrance brings you into this world of spinning, wanting to just look at him. When finally remembering theres a ring on your finger.

Love it
5/5 :)

A delicate and touching poem, nothing heavy yet powerful. Each line brought the reader a little closer to your inner feelings, making them open and beautiful
Excellent

This romantic poem flowed so well for me