by Lonely Rider Dec 16, 2011
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Delightfully crafted, |
by christopher
Sorry to hear about your kid brother i hope and pray that he makes a recovery as for your poem it is very good and straight to the point the layout is good and your description of the mind and a conundrum and a maze of alleyways i picture of the human mind in this poem |
by shadow
I'm sorry this happened to your brother. i like seeing poems triggered by feelings in the soul and i liked the way your poem is so diffrent from everyone elses. |
by Paul Gondwe
Such a sweet poem to ur kid bro...i hope he gets better, all it will take is time and ur support as u hav cleary shown in this piece. |
by Lioness
I am so sorry that this has happened to your brother. |
Very sad, but as he is very young, he should eventually do well. A youthful brain is very resilient to injury. Hopefully, he will have a full recovery, as retrograde amnesia tends to recover with time, as long as he does not have any significant brain damage such as impairment of other aspects of cognition, learning or forming new memories. |