This must have been very difficult for you to write about and I hope the process of putting your thoughts on paper has helped you.

It's hard to watch a little person develop knowing that...at any time...things can change in a flash. One minute they arewhole and the next....

I really loved the second stanza for it shows you are not giving up and you still have hope....sometimes they will never be the same but with love...everyone can adjust to it...it will just be a little different is all.

Sweet God, you really surprised me with the dedication. I thought it was about you, or something.. but, wow, really kudos for you for making such a piece. Hope he's okay now? is it permanent?
I can't find the write words, it feels so eerily perfect.

I'm so sorry but you penned something awesome in the wake of your sorrow's.
Your poems carry so much heart, each one I have read no matter the subject.
I loved this

Connie

Sorry to hear about your brother Raj and I can
understand how hard it must have been to write this. My prayers are with you and your family..take care.

Very sad, but as he is very young, he should eventually do well. A youthful brain is very resilient to injury. Hopefully, he will have a full recovery, as retrograde amnesia tends to recover with time, as long as he does not have any significant brain damage such as impairment of other aspects of cognition, learning or forming new memories.

On a side note: sometimes we wish we can forget some of our past, but God has not given us that power, to keep just our good memories and forget our bad one's.

I am so sorry that this has happened to your brother.

Memory loss can be quite difficult. It is good though that he has survived the accident.

A lovely dedication to you brother. I hope he reads this

x

Such a sweet poem to ur kid bro...i hope he gets better, all it will take is time and ur support as u hav cleary shown in this piece.

I'm sorry this happened to your brother. i like seeing poems triggered by feelings in the soul and i liked the way your poem is so diffrent from everyone elses.

Sorry to hear about your kid brother i hope and pray that he makes a recovery as for your poem it is very good and straight to the point the layout is good and your description of the mind and a conundrum and a maze of alleyways i picture of the human mind in this poem