I really enjoyed this. It was so calm and soothing with a quick edge of melancholy.

The personification of the mouse was a nice touch. Its one of my favorite attributes in poetry.

"why risk myself
to your ice-covered
lies,your winter-filled
replies"

Loved loved loved those lines! Impeccable flow throughout the entire piece and so much emotion!!!
Great job!

Holly Armer wrote a comment before me, Ibut HOLLY GOD you have written a Self control poem, better than mine. I love this sad little big master piece.

i love ur choice of words..i love ur metaphors..i love ur poems, i love ur sadness...i love u yakyak

5/5 girl, well done

Another great write. This one touched me in a way your other poem didn't. This really pulled at my heart strings and I connected with it. I read this as a love poem and it seemed to be about wanting to connect with someone yet knowing better inside because they have treated you badly in the past. A powerful poem.

5/5