This piece is interesting. It makes the reader stop and think for a moment, and I think that is a nice touch. The word choice seems to be the perfect choice and the flow is perfect, and seems so natural its almost unreal. The rhyme scheme is also quite natural and it is amazing. Magnificent job.

5/5

"The tenets that we have crossed"

This line is a very strong finish for this well written poem that inspired me to do some deep thinking