Comments : The Diary Of Tears ( Six )

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Adel, the message that I take from this is basically we feel on top of the world and all is good when we first awake and before life starts each day and reality sets in. This does have some sadness to it but not as much as I normally feel in your words. Good job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    It is like been surrounded in a world of bliss and not caring for anything until you break away from the dream of bliss and return to reality..liked the read.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great lines~

    All these ages of gladness, my hated unreader, you feel in a second of morning awakening once you inhale your miserable cigarette and take a sip of your bitter coffee,

    Nicely written! 5/5!

    Ray