Kind of gloomy but somehow i understand what your saying...kind of...
hope your life get's better
so just remember
your not alone in this shadow realm!
sincerly
Lil
Jay

This piece is amazing. It really stands out. The emotion is here as is your very clear voice. Awesome job, and excellent piece

I can picture every scene in this piece i really enjoyed it! keep it up!

<3Katie

I do not ever know what to say to comment your poems but they are seriously really good! like it make you speechless! i love this poem 1000/1000

Oh my gosh, the emotions here are so clear. The imagery is stunning and the word choice is fantastic. This whole piece really speaks a lot about who you are and how you think. Great job. 5/5

I am in awe with this piece.... loved the wording, and imagery... very intense...well done ~

I fell in love with this poem as I was reading it. I thought it was a fantastic piece of work! Great Job