Lost

Tremendously sad. really. i can relate to this. its a well of despair. awesome poem however

Good job...i could really invision this lonely kid who just wants someone to care enough to take time out of their life for him..very descriptive write :)

Wow...

definitely sounds like a lost boy :( I thought this poem was good, it's nicely written and well thought up.....I think when you wrote "crys" you meant "cries" but other then that I think you did a good job on this poem, its definitely sad. but I like how you wrote that he liked solitude.... made it more interesting to read , so nice job writing this :)