Comments : Unexpected

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    When life does not go the way we planned and takes us by surprise it can be unexpected. I love the way you have expressed this in your poem.

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    Well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Life's timing is unexpected... totally true.
    no one knows if ull stop breathing at this second... Great write. I love the development of the idea.