Comments : Love, Your Baby Girl...

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow girl this is amazing<3

    Truly from the heart.

    In a way I want to thank you
    Because of you I'm strong
    I just wanted you to know
    I didn't turn out wrong
    -I love this. Showing her that even though she walked out of your life; You didn't become a bad person.

    This is a beautiful touching poem. Show the pain of how bad it hurt you when she left. Then when she realized and felt the pain she caused she wants you to forgive her. Even though shes your mom, the pain she caused was to much for you to even consider forgiving.

    Flawless
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Snickerpie

    Seriously girl, thank you for all your comments...they're so thoughtful, motivating, full of praise & inspiration. i've never met you but, i feel like ive known you forever from all the late night convoc and texts about...well...you know :)

    Anyways, thanks for being you :) love you girl :)

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I know girl I do too :)

    & you're welcome.
    Love you too :)

    Ill text you tomorrow :)

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I think I told you once but I'll tell you again. Love the name
    I have to say it's nice to see a poem of this kind placed on the nominations. You penned a poem that flows with excellent wording. Good job