by Soulaika Dec 20, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I could wait for a long time, if you would just say you would be there. I could love you more and more, if loving you is worth all the pains and the tears in my heart. You could be my music, a melody my heart loves to sing. You could be my forever; if forever would be your melody too. |
by HARRY
Good |
by Xionide
Hmm, interesting piece. Such love present throughout, the mix of loss gave it a nice twist, you poured a lot of feeling into this. Pretty straight forward flow as if saying what was exactly on your mind, poetry comes in many forms, this is a lovely piece. It makes it so much better when reading a poem like this you feel that discomfort of the poem, knowing it not to be some made up jumbo, well done. |