Okay, this is the 2nd poem ive ever read of yours and right away you've become one of the best picture painters in poetry i have ever seen, your ability to word things in such a way the reader can literally visually see what your saying takes a true gift. This poem is no different, the vocab is is faultless. Well done miss. 5/5

I absolutely LOVE this poem. It is amazing, it created beautiful pictures in my mind. I like how you word things and the words that you use to explain things.

Looooovvvee it :)