My true friends

by Hollow Face   Dec 20, 2011


The truths now unfold
The story is now told
Crying eyes
Hidden Lies
Just to many goodbyes

Now it is forever, like before
But this time is different
I have closed the door
Sorry is just a word
And the memories will become blurred

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hollow Face

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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    This poem's flow is fabulous. The piece just kept me in, though it must have been sad for you to find out that they were líes but this piece doesn't sound too much painful but more like acceptance. As for the piece its great. Keep up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Xionide

    I love this poem! This is simple but it's worded geniusly. This has cheered me up. Cheers.

    Your opening stanza defines this poem, it captures it's reader early, essential if you wanna keep a reader to the end. You have a gift. Nicely done

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