I love this poem! This is simple but it's worded geniusly. This has cheered me up. Cheers.

Your opening stanza defines this poem, it captures it's reader early, essential if you wanna keep a reader to the end. You have a gift. Nicely done

This poem's flow is fabulous. The piece just kept me in, though it must have been sad for you to find out that they were líes but this piece doesn't sound too much painful but more like acceptance. As for the piece its great. Keep up the good work.

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