by Kips2.0 Dec 20, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
A tale of broken love. |
Wow a fantastic job u guys,,I love love loved it! :) it's an amazing write and it's sad,,imagery is great and flow of course,,excellent 5/5 |
by Lauren denbow
Thts relly good! |
by Kips2.0
Karis, my main goal of writing is to touch hearts. I'm glad that this piece touches your heart. You have to thank Renegade Angel too, she brought in her own part too so strongly. |
This poem is actually exactly what i just went through. It like you took exactly what my heart was going throught and sayng and wrote it down better than anyone could. Your an amazing writer and you should pursue this to further you in life. Your writing has brought out what my heart is singing out. Great job. Please I beg you contuine to write.. |
by Kips2.0
Thanks |