by Broken Angel Dec 21, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Trust me on this. |
by John Doe
I like your narration,the way you go from talking to inside your head and again talking. But you should try to keep the rhyme scheme consistent or write free verse. |
by Marvellous
I like the simple nature at which this craft was dedicated. Great job, keep writing. |