This piece is interesting. I like how it shows pieces of thoughts, but not enough to take a lot of space. The piece flows well and has a nice word choice, good job. I am defiantly a fan of this piece.

I thought you might be the author of this verse when I saw it in the contest. This poem is much deeper than some may think...it has a wonderful message that apparently flew over the top of some heads. Pity...real pity!

I like how you start off with "six feet tall" to "six feet deep." The flow was marvelous. :) Very beautiful poem I like this a lot. :)

The way I understood this piece is that no one really know us except god. That no one has the right to judge us except him. I really enjoy the comparison you made about being tall and that compare to the stars you are not. I also like the way you incorporated zodiac signs to say that sometimes you really don't know if you are a Virgo or a Leo. Also the way you use the snake, how we can easily be tempted. Well done.

OMG Michael, what can I say about this? I really have no words, except that you are a master with words.
It flows and feels perfect. First few lines were my favorite, but I loved the whole thing as well.

Well, I am a Virgo too, what does that make me look like in others eyes?

God bless you

This poem is very interesting and really makes the reader question their own beliefs and the way they view things. A deep write.

5/5

I could say that it's about equality? seeing others in subjective points of view? but in the end... we're all the same, so why talking tall? The only one who'd talk tall to us is him, Allah.

Great message Michael. If it's about that, and I missed many things... then, amazing amazing piece my friend. I wonder why it didn't make the 1st round, and my stupid poem did... real pity, like Hellon said.

* Edited: I don't think that the idea of having a LEO ego, knowing that you are a Virgo, has anything to do with its flat meaning.
I think you meant here not the zodiac, but the word itself. LEO, as a lion, strong. People see you strong, knowing that you are not (Virgo, as a sensitive woman)..... mmm... I love it, Michael. I really do.

ummm... it's hard to grasp the exact meaning, some help please? :)

but at any level, I love how smooth it went, yet how vivid every line seemed.

Now this piece really moved me... I loved the flow of the poem, but that is a minor statement in comparison to ho this poem touched me. I do love the way you expressed your emotions, your passion towards your faith and love for God... it is felt...deeply felt in this piece and I applaud you.