Diagnosed

by sun spots   Dec 21, 2011


I am so stuck on you.
I cannot let you go.
Your on my mind constantly.
And sleep thats a no.
People start to notice.
Is everything ok.
Yes, i never felt better.
I feel better everyday.
But i will only be cured.
When the nurse says to me.
I,ve diagnosed your problem.
And your problem that is me.
the cure i have is love.
And i pass it on to you.
And when you,ve had your medicine.
I,ll take that medicine too.

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  • 12 years ago

    by sun spots

    Thanks for the high score.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Awwww this was a really nice poem. You summed up what it is like to love someone and hope they feel the same

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by sun spots

    Thank you nursey.
    Now give me more medicine.

  • 12 years ago

    by sun spots

    Thats good doctor childs x