Passionate Romance

by Meme   Dec 21, 2011


Hiding behind an alias, a mysterious
avatar. Living in a world, that is ruled
by these- few verses that sometimes
rhyme and in other times they don't.
A world where I found my thoughts
rambling in an empty sheet, pouring
the contents of my heart.

My pen took me into an endless
journey making repetitive stops
into different islands of poetry, but
mostly took me to the place where
only imagination could fill that void
I had inside, the vulnerable piece that
I tend to hide. I never was able to put
it into words, until today.

It took me a while to understand
what you meant when you said
"Your passionate romance is so
pure for the life we live in." But it
seems that you were able to read
in between the lines of my poetry,
not realizing that you have revealed
the weakest side of me.

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*Inspired by the words written on a PM that was sent to me.
Thanks for that PM Mo :)

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© Copyright 2011 by: gIrL
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  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    A poem I really enjoyed reading

    The use of the word avatar makes me think of not being yourself or people not looking or knowing the real you

    Then this person you are writing about it seems as though he has seen the deeper side of you and knows you completely.

    Well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    This poem is great and amazing a very delightful read I very much loved it everything was great :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    WOW!!! I'm speechless.... Meme this is the one of the best poems I've ever read... I love how unique and original it is, but how it's also so relatable! We all feel that way when we express our poetry... but I seriously am at a loss of words. This poem is beautiful!!! And I just loved the raw emotions and honesty you penned so beautifully... I just loved it so much! This poem is a masterpiece!!! Amazing poem and not only deserve a nomination, but deserves to win! =D Great job hon!

  • 12 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    ....nyc inspiration. dat became a wonderful poem..;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is very well written , Most of us can easily relate I really enjoyed this and cannot think of anything I could say to do it justice

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