This is such a sad, but lovely poem. Your emotions truly shine through and it just makes it outstanding. I really love this poem and cannot find a criticism for it. Lovely! 5/5 <3

Wow. This is an interesting way to look at things. And Im sorry for whatever actually caused the piece. Although it is amazing. The subtle rhymes are nice and the style is common yet your voice really makes it yours. I have to say the word choice is immaculate. Great piece. Very emotional.

5/5

Mrk

Very deep poem 5/5