by BlueJay
This piece is so well written. Great job with the descriptions and imagery. The word choice seems to be perfect, awesome job. |
A vivid image of a Cheetah on the hunt played out the scene in my mind. Your writing in the mind of a cat works very well in this write. Excellent |
by Chelsey
I would only suggest two things. Break this into stanza's and if you do, don't start every word with a capital letter. It just helps the reader read it a little easier. |