by Britt
That first stanza just kills me. So many people are going to relate to this whole piece, but the first stanza is something that will hit home as it did for me. I love the way you described everything in such detail, such imagery. |
I loved this Yak, great work, the opening was good, but your second stanza, I just keep going back to reread it lol I think this would sound nice spoken. |
by PoetryKnight
Kudos to you for this poem, a 5/5 indeed, keep on writting, and I'll keep reading |
by PoetryKnight
Kudos to you for this poem, a 5/5 indeed, keep on writting, and I'll keep reading |
I love this poem!!!!!!! |
by Melpomene
Yaki, |
All I can say is I loved it fantastic wording and it's amazingly written :) 5/5 |