Comments : Supreme Being

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Well done.
    This piece is simple. It has rhymes. It includes the words holly and jolly and it shows the purpose of this holidays and not just that it's fun to read.

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Yeah, I agree 100% with Everlasting. I would also like to add that the flow is so smooth and the word choice really tells a lot about this piece. Great write and thank you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Yeah....the poem is a simple yet refreshing poem and conveys its purpose well....Nice write.....
    good work...:))

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Title was-first notion was that it was about someone special and being in special event I thought wedding/engagement

    then Christmas!
    Where does the title fit
    (Jesus?)

    Rhymes were good.
    I love christmas and I agree some people don't, And I'll never know why.

    Well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem was inpired by a discussion on this site "What you think?"
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=133340

    Supreme Being is often defined simply as "God",[1] and it is used with this meaning by theologians of many religious faiths, including, but not limited to, Christianity,[2] Islam,[3] Hinduism,[4] and Deism.[5] However, the term can also refer to more complex or philosophical interpretations of the divine.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Good poem with a good flow. I liked how you kept the poem simple yet managed to make the reader think by ending with a question.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Ah, I thought it was inspire by Britts contest.
    Christmas and the reason for Christmas the supreme being.

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I also had Britt's contest on my mind Holy holly joy and jolly have something in common plus or minus L's lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Omg wow this poem is sooo amazing I absolutely loved it :) it's short but good feely and lots of meaning greatly written it's so amazing 5/5 :)