by L
Well done. |
by BlueJay
Yeah, I agree 100% with Everlasting. I would also like to add that the flow is so smooth and the word choice really tells a lot about this piece. Great write and thank you. |
by Amreen
Yeah....the poem is a simple yet refreshing poem and conveys its purpose well....Nice write..... |
by Tara Kay
Title was-first notion was that it was about someone special and being in special event I thought wedding/engagement |
This poem was inpired by a discussion on this site "What you think?" |
Good poem with a good flow. I liked how you kept the poem simple yet managed to make the reader think by ending with a question. |
by L
Ah, I thought it was inspire by Britts contest. |
I also had Britt's contest on my mind Holy holly joy and jolly have something in common plus or minus L's lol |
Omg wow this poem is sooo amazing I absolutely loved it :) it's short but good feely and lots of meaning greatly written it's so amazing 5/5 :) |