omg that was the best story ive ever read. u rock!

dude!!! that was soo awesome. I never wanted to stop reading it! You can do it all...you're great!

~rolo

This is a great piece of work you’re an excellent writer and have great talent.

hey Im so glad you wrote another part to that story! It was REALLY good and your a great writter keep it up=)

WOW THE SECOND PART WAS THE BEST GOOD THING THAT YOU SAVED HER. YOU REALLY DIO KNOW HOW TO EXPRESS YOUR SELF. AND THAT'S AMAIZING. GOOD JOB AND KEEP IT UP.
LOVE, JACQUELINE JIMENEZ, L.O.L

That Was Such An Amazing Story. And What A Subject! You Are Truely Gifted And Now Thats One Of My Favorite Short Stories. If Only There Was A Time Machine And We Could All Go Back And Fix The Biggest Accidents Like That. Great Job!

that was one of the best things i've read on this website! Keep it up!

both of them were sssooooo good! ur very talented! if u were to write a book or something i will be the first to buy and read it!

TEar* tear* give me a fe minuites to wipe my eyes... no joke... i ams eriously crying... sisterly love is what i feel right now.... that story touched my heart so much... i can't believe that you wrote such a story... it is wow... amazing i mean it was really good... heart warming.. touch worthy... oscaring winning<< thats for sure! Story... so u wrote it for english what did u recieve on it~ ALways
Lyssa

I don't know what I got on it :-( He never gave it back, so I had to write it from memory. Never told me if it was good or not neither, that's why I put it on here. I knew that you guys would be honest. So Thanks! :-)

Sad... but uplifting! I wish we all could get a hold of a time machine, and change the past.

That was amazing! I loved it

I loved it!!!

what can i say! you did a fantastic job for this story! omg it was so good... i absolutly loved it! :o]

good job hunn, i've read it before, i'm just goin through all your stuff again... good job

Great poem I like it alot