Comments : Blind

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I know how this feels. A lot of people can relate to it.

    Crying for the one who don't care
    Don't you see me standing here?
    -Love how you ended it with that. How they can't see that you're standing there right infront of them; being the right person.

    This poem was short but straight to the point :). Shows what people go through, how it usually always ends up being the same & how alot can't see what is right in front of their faces.

    Great Job(:
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Brandon

    Thank you, i appreciate it