Christmas is a happy time for many but at times it raises questions and not everyone is blessed with everything they need or require.

The way you incorporated this was well done,
I felt sometimes the flow was a little rocky where some rhymes were fit in.

Overall a nice piece

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This poem really touched me because it ind of reminds myself of how most Teenage females feel when they have been hurt or emotionally abused due to any type of confrontation.

Sometimes, you feel as if you are not allowed to be happy due to things said or done in your past. I like the poem as a whole, but the fourth stanza must have hit home for me more.

You did a great job

I love this made me want christmas again lol ho ho ho