Get Off Your High Horse

You can kiss my gluteus maximus
..................
Your ignorance
and pretentious thoughts
hide the reality that you are nothing

- these are my most favorite but love thee entire peice :) outstanding writing of the words, fantastically written and great with showing emotions it's amazing and I really loved it and the imagery is terrific,,u can see the relationship,,very very well done 5/5
but a speck of dirt

This venting is done so skillfully in very good taste

Amazing, its so great, LOVE IT:) a 5/5 from me

I really enjoyed this poem, and I love the meaning of it. I like the strength I felt while reading, the strength of moving on and realizing how a person really is... and it was very inspiring... We all can relate to being around people who are pretentious and egotistical, so it was interesting to read your thoughts on this in your poem. I loved the opening stanza - it was setting everything straight with pure honesty... I like that!

I like the second stanza too - you should be grateful that you're no longer associate with such a person! And leaving someone like that is not always easy, so be proud of yourself!

I love that you used the word "chauvinistic" .. it is a perfect word to be used in this poem! And I think a lot of people who are like the way you described do act like that!

I loveee how you wrote gluteus maximus! Honestly that part really cracked me up! It was a nicer and better of saying butt, and that's good! Because using the word butt would not have made the poem as good!

And the ending was straightforward and nicely done! Great job! =)

Thank you guys so much for your comments. Like LP and Everlasting I have removed the word You from the poem

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