I've never read a poem about this. But i like it :).

You don't know it, but you whisper
I need you
But I don't want to
Because I don't want me
And neither should you
You're just as broken as me
You whisper kiss me
Because each kiss distracts you
From the chaos numbing your brain
-This is one of my fav parts. Saying how hes just as broken as you are & that you don't want him to want you bcuz you don't want yourself.

I like how with the end you ended it saying how the whispers let you determine if its real. Good job you can feel the emotion & it flows really good :)

5/5