Oh my, don't we all feel like this at times?
Hope all is okay, you seem to be writing such stuff that makes me worry girl :/

Love the flow and simpleness, wording and unique style, just awesome

xxx

I found it to be a unique style just as Tara, and I also hope its just fiction or inspire by something other than how you feel.

The poem's flow is incredible, I read it fast and for me it sounded great.

I have found a few poems on here that could potentially be written about me lol i think this is one of them

I swear the words inthis reflect my own feelings about myself

Well done with this poem hun

x

That hit me to the core. I tried not to read it quickly because with the shortness in evrery line makes you uninterested. But slowly, I felt the sadness and the dissatisfaction you have of your own figure (true or not.. I felt that).

But a beam of light comes...should come... you're beautiful in the inside.

Great piece.

I'm not being insensitive in anyway so please don't take this as such in case this is how you feel. But I had to smile reading it, I think everyone has been to that point in their life.

I liked the shorts lines, the way it flowed and the deep seeded meaning. It was an excellent write and one easy to understand and relate too.

It's simple but effective and shows a lot of emotion 5/5

This is amazing. It really blew me a way, it was like a slap across the face. You never cease to amaze me but each poem surprises me b/c its sooo good. I haven't read your work in a while and it was like a breath of fresh air. Excellent write : )

Dani
xox

A heartbreaking piece, what I love about your poetry too is that it is simple and so raw, it's powerful with those few words that reflect how you feel. I think we can all relate that we sometimes we feel not good enough, but don't get down on yourself. You are beautiful- your soul is unique and made to be loved :)

Wondreful flow and rhyme, it hits the mind hard with all the imagery.

Take care!