Dancing Sisters of the Sea

Andrea, what a fabulous dark piece you have here.

skeletal fingers, stroking twisted thoughts
right in front of our eyes...
^^
Loved this, creepy.

Em

Skeletal fingers, stroking twisted thoughts
right in front of our eyes...

- eww, creepy image lol. You have such an imagitive way with words.

I loved the rhyme scheme, it made it flow nice.

Very Nicely Done, Kudos!!!

Yes, dark and creepy but so cool! The flow is stunning. The word choice is magnificent. It is a terrific piece and I'm on my way to read more, because I love this piece. The creativity and emotion in the piece really pull it to greater depths than I would have imagined. Not to mention how enticing the piece is.

5/5 of course.

What a creepy, dark poem you have here! So awesome what you are doing with the prompts, that is incredible! I love the rhyme here and felt the flow was awesome.. SO eerie!