Hi Amanda,

I like the imagery set in this poem. It is very dark and sad with a lot of emotion.

I think this poem would look better spread out over some stanzas which will make it easier to read.

The poem itself was great. I am sure so many people will be able to relate to this poem.

If this is you, I am sorry you are going through this.

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Absolutely beautiful. I completely understand. Im at that place also.