Comments : I PROMISE

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Such Promises that hold their fortune, I can sincerely applaud as a brave heart's gift. OMG!, But, it's so sad really.. Take heart!

  • 12 years ago

    by lost angel

    Thank you. it was really hard for me to write. some things i keep so close that it starts to hurt and this is the way i knew i could do it. express it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley Nicole

    Beautiful Just... wow

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    This poem made me cry.

    It's never easy losing a loved one watching them die knowing you can't do anything to bring them back. fighting the pain and trying hard to live on without them by your side.

    Memories of us together flashed by my eyes.
    One straight after another.
    Tears were bleeding down my face.
    I remembered times when he held my hand told me everything would be alright. We could fight this world together. We could be scared together. We would be

    ^^
    This stanza really touched me.
    Remembering the times you shared and just hurting cos the memories is all you have left.

    This poem really touched me it was beautifully sad love(:

    5/5 even thou it should be a higher rate(:

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