Eternal Rest!

by James Weatherbee   Dec 29, 2011


The boy is lost
No way out it seems
Trapped inside these...
Inside these horrible dreams
Nightmares of a time
That is now so long past
His life has grown darker
So very impossibly fast
His hopes of happiness
Even now fade
He waits till when to rest
Eternally he will be laid

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  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    This is really powerful poem, but you wrote the wrong kind of seems and you wrote "inside these." Twice. So if you change those two things and let me know then I'll rate it.

    Hope that helps.

    -Heather

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