I am a Snowflake

by Maple Tree   Dec 30, 2011


Walking outside, inhaling the beauty, breathtaking
first fallen snow captivates my soul
for within its freshness, my excitement explodes.

Whisking me away, within the rushing winds
snow boots become wings
as I transform into a snowflake.

Magical expressions upon my face
as nature revives my pale cheeks
leaving these old, stale tears frozen.

I am reborn, to start a new season
alive again "I whisper".

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    You have such amazing idea's in your writing. I loved this one it was like a scene from a fairy tale. It has made me excited for winter to come and hope we get some snow. Snowflakes are just so beautiful. This poem made me think of freedom, not sure why, it was just the feeling I picked up while reading it.

  • 12 years ago

    by tainted melody

    This was so creative and captivating...great write...i am gonna put u on my fav list. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tim Kavi

    Thank you for the vision in this poem... the hope of rebirth in the purity of white landscapes where rebirths always seem to move from whispered promises to inspired shouts of fulfillment.

  • 12 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    I love it mama! this the kind of poem that I really adore... it contains elegant and hippy imagery... nice and deep! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Half Husband Half father

    I loved it, amazin use of imagery, dis poem is jst is... Unique 5/5 :-)

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