I'm Not Sorry that I LOVE U

by ArtistrySoul   Dec 31, 2011


I Love U,
but is it a game that were playing
or is it love that's taking away the rain

i'm not sorry that i love u
i don't want to lose all i have,
no i'm not confused
my feelings don't
have a short fuse

you have just witnessed
a boy becoming a man
now you have a reason
for loving me, you get emotional
and say no, not any more
but you don't want to be
abandoned as your heart
is been filled with fractions of love

why would i be sorry?
when u make my dark clouds go away
I feel good when i'm near you
just me and you, soft sweet love
like a pearl floating
from its shell

you smile, i smile back
I know how to treat a women
as u give me that love back
holding your hand
u won't let go,
as if your fabricated
to your childhood blanket
when my eyes take pictures of you
u know i love you so bad
that's why i'm hanging up
my love for you on a flag

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is amazing! So sweet to the ears. I loved your lines, they're well thought out. Its always such an overwhelming feeling when you greatly feel for someone. That person might reciprocate fully or halfway but your love has no limits. Loving someone is the most peace rained feeling ever. Can get twisted but that's the mystery of all love stories. Love is a beautiful string of affection, heart warming and dynamic. Keep writing! :) ..

  • 12 years ago

    by Krysten

    Another great poem full of emotion and beautifuly written. My only issue is with the last line, it seems rather forced in comparison to the rest of the piece but otherwise good job another 5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Thank you :0), yeah my older poems are felt slightly forced as i tried getting too much ideas in a poem, but my most recent ones are far better but thank anyway :)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I enjoyed reading this piece but I feel like it's missing something, I'm not sure what it is.

    I so like reading the parts where you wrote like this :

    "just me and you, soft sweet love
    like a pearl floating
    out of its shell"

    Comparing how love is to you, and giving the reader the option to interpret your piece with their own thoughts. I don't know how a pearl feels like but I know it looks pretty and that one might want to admire it. So keep up the good work.

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