I enjoyed reading this piece but I feel like it's missing something, I'm not sure what it is.

I so like reading the parts where you wrote like this :

"just me and you, soft sweet love
like a pearl floating
out of its shell"

Comparing how love is to you, and giving the reader the option to interpret your piece with their own thoughts. I don't know how a pearl feels like but I know it looks pretty and that one might want to admire it. So keep up the good work.

Another great poem full of emotion and beautifuly written. My only issue is with the last line, it seems rather forced in comparison to the rest of the piece but otherwise good job another 5/5

This is amazing! So sweet to the ears. I loved your lines, they're well thought out. Its always such an overwhelming feeling when you greatly feel for someone. That person might reciprocate fully or halfway but your love has no limits. Loving someone is the most peace rained feeling ever. Can get twisted but that's the mystery of all love stories. Love is a beautiful string of affection, heart warming and dynamic. Keep writing! :) ..