Comments : Running, Just To Stand Still

  • 13 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow. This was so emotional and I can just tell you poured your heart out. It was something I could really relate with. Sometimes we question if someone really cares and are afraid to even ask. What caught my eye the most about this poem was your title, it was very unique and a poem in itself. I really enjoyed reading this poem and even after a couple of times of reading it, the emotions still packed a bunch. Very well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    An emotional write that brings something out for the reader... that feeling of being completely stuck and not certain who to go to. You penned this so deeply- straight from your soul and loved the whole them you brought out. I agree- that the title was original and you gave that whole atmosphere of wanting to do something but still being lost.....
    Great work again- so many of your poems the emotions just captivate me, they are a real work of art :)