If you could/would, I would appreciate feedback. I have no training and just write the words as i feel or they come into my head. Have no idea if i'm doint it "right". Thanks. Terry

This is a very beautiful poem. I love the idea of a thousand beautiful lakes - as if one wasn't enough to describe her 

There is so much love that can be felt in this poem. It looks like that you have written from your heart so I believe that is the best possible thing we can do as writers.

You did well with this poem!!!