Comments : Me and not me

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Hey hun,

    This poem shows a few different emotions - I like that.

    There are certain points where you show vulnerability and then of course strength showing your independence.

    An enjoyable read

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Aaron

    Wow. this poem is um, fantastic :) 10/10)

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    I love
    I lust
    I like

    This is awesome! I like the honest feelings that are puncuated by the wording. well done