I could get from this tender poem with all its sensibility and consideration that you do not need to make excuses for the lover on why you love him... I love the 'ink' part and the 'ocean' and the image of 'growing together'.. as if you're proving for him something he doesn't know. What a piece of rawness and organic emotions. Great job:)

I love this piece, it has so much emotion and so many descriptions. This piece is excellent.

I am speechles..truly a masterpiece..fp