Written with deep emotion, I love you

by Maple Tree   Jan 1, 2012


I can write with a simplistic tone, saying " I love you"
Forever and always , ending it with a kiss and a dot at the end.

However, my metaphoric heart mixes with an organic need to be me

Anointing my pen desires mixed with emotions, causing a cataclysmic explosion..

Your love devours these eyes of mine when you walk into a room

A simple smile, follows those sweet dimples of yours,
I call it your shadow stalker face, how I love those five o'clock goatee tickle kisses

It's the way you move me, causing candles to ignite all by themselves

As your eyes fill my soul with loving tears, drowning in an everlasting love

But as I lay my pen to rest, after writing from the depths of my heart....

I turn and simply say to you, "I love you"

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww how sweet, I like how you started the poem with I love you, and ended it the same way. It emphasises the power of this phrase and sign of affection which a lot of people do not use enough and they realize too late.

    I loved the way you showed the relationship by describing the affects he has not only on you but the things surrounding you like the candles. It is like the prince from a disney film.

    I like your poems about true love - they touch me deeper than you might realise and it means a lot for me to be able to read these emotions and know someone else has experienced the real love that I once did.

    Great poem about a great love.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    That is so creative!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I love the simplicity of the idea, yet the complexity of the atmospheres. great

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