Faith is something I run over and jump
and nothing will spark like it used to.

I wish my heart were made of glass,
instead of sentiment and aching,
then there would be shards to repass
and you would fix me with integrity.

^ Those lines hit home for me. I tremendously like your tone in them, a reminiscent tone maybe... with torment hitting at the very core.

- inners, should be inner.

- The way you ended that is very powerful, as if ur assuring that he made your life.. lifeless, soulless...
brilliant.

I bow to your write of deep souls sadness. It' fills in all the corners others seem to leave out. Excellent write , I always enjoy your work.

How emotional

I couldn't help but be moved by your words as you gave the poem such depth and feeling.

I wouldn't change anything about this piece as its fine how it is

Excellent write

5/5