Illusions Escape

This poem is so full of sadness.

You can tell right away that you are in this point in your life when you feel you don't know what road to take or which decisions to make.

The feeling of being trapped can be felt in this poem

I absolutely love the last stanza and last line

So very powerful and really sums up what you are feeling

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This was a good poem it really was I read it and it flowed really nicely its just so sad it makes the heart ache .... was written very nicely this way you can feel the emotions as you read -especially if you can relate. I really liked how you added the questioning if you should even bother with it too, im sure everyone asks themselves that..... but good poem :)

OMG Kristian!
This was amazingly written.. like amazing!!

The more I feel
the closer you get
the more I let you in,
I pull back even further

^ I can feel that you are so trapped inside the box of your emotions and his way of pulling your strings to surrender.
I can also tell that your words are masked by a black cover which tends to psycho complexities. It was heavy, the darkness.. and I just love every part of it.
'thee- should be the'
-emptyness- should be emptiness'

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I tremendously like the whole atmosphere, and your susceptibility conveyed. so powerful!