Setting you free is so hard for me

Wow great intense emotion and a good write I enjoyed it though it's sad,,I did not mind of course cuz the poems great and if true hugs cuz I like my friends happy but I know how things are,,perhaps something great will come from something not great,,fantastic poem :)

Oohw... thanks for the advice :P LOL ill take note of it LOL :))

Oohw... thanks for the advice :P LOL ill take note of it LOL :))

I like the simplicity of this poem, but I'd recommend you to try and avoid repetitions, because that might bore the reader. The feeling is definately there and I can imagine that it was hard for you to let her go, especially if you still love her, but sometimes it's the only choice you have.

Keep on writing!