I like the simplicity of this poem, but I'd recommend you to try and avoid repetitions, because that might bore the reader. The feeling is definately there and I can imagine that it was hard for you to let her go, especially if you still love her, but sometimes it's the only choice you have.

Keep on writing!

Oohw... thanks for the advice :P LOL ill take note of it LOL :))

Oohw... thanks for the advice :P LOL ill take note of it LOL :))

Wow great intense emotion and a good write I enjoyed it though it's sad,,I did not mind of course cuz the poems great and if true hugs cuz I like my friends happy but I know how things are,,perhaps something great will come from something not great,,fantastic poem :)